2sidedfantasies (2sidedfantasies) wrote in addme_bdsm,
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New here

Name: Call me R for now
Age: In late 20s
Location: AZ, US
Master, slave, pet: Capable of all
Relationship status: Married
Looking for: New friends with similar dirty minds
Sexuality: Bi but prefer men
Turn on: dirty mind, manners, dirty talk, innuendo, whispers, biting, age play, dom or sub, dark hair, smirk, etc.
Turn off: rude and disrespectful behaviors, no means no, not able to spell, girls who says "like" too much
Anything else: I am a straight forward kind of person. My mind is a filthy trap and I wont be watching what I say in my journal. Most, if not all, posts will be about sex. Oh and please excuse the lack of punctuation marks in places. I am typing on a tablet and its a pain in the butt haha.
Bit about my journal: It will be sex, dirty and fantasies. I am intereested in like minded friends. It takes quite a bit to offend me but not into anything illegal or anything involving bodily fluids that belongs in the toilet.
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Hello R, and welcome to the group! :)
Excuse the stupidity on my part, but what sex are you?

Soo... in you "mid", not able to spell is a turn off? *wink*

I'll have to watch your journal and when you start posting more entries, ask for a friendship so I can read them. :)

(I triple checked myself of course for spelling errors after my above remark. LOL)
Hahaha I just caught that. In my defense, typing on a tablet sucks. :)

Im definitely a girl, probably should have mentioned that.
Let's not let the facts confuse the issue!you typoed! LOL
I can relate, I am using a keyboard that is broken and sometimes all manner of typos start to occur. yeah, that's my story and I am sticking to it! (never a case of me having a senior moment(s). Nooooo. heh)

Yeah, that's the kind of thing some people look for. Others, don't care too much (but that's fine for them :) ).

So do you have specific journal entries that you are itching to write or do you have writer's block like the rest of us (or have you already written some dirty minded stuff?)?

Say, if you have a moment (or three), please read my story "Tales from the Bad Girl Bar" and tell me your opinion of how I did on the F/f stuff. More the interactions than the content quality. I ran out of room and had to shorten some of the "action" heh
Writing from a point of view I have no knowledge of makes me a little more than a little uneasy. LOL
I will never agree that it was a typo lol. Well, maybe. :)

I have a few things in mind to scribble down but I'm quite positive the writer's block will come soon enough.

I just got done reading your story and found it very interesting. The content that is. I love the idea of performance like that. It was very well written and made me keep reading with only one sneeze break. :)

As far as F/f interaction goes, you have nothing to worry about. If it was real life, the conversation would have been way different but since it was a play, it was very appropriate. I especially loved how Summer went from calling he mom to eventually mommy, which some of us actually do.
well get scribbling! :) you know what they say about writer's block? it's as contagious as a yawn.

Why thank you, I... awww! a sneeze break? :( what part of the story did it happen?

"If it was real life, the conversation would have been way different" could you expand on that a bit? I didn't try to make it as domestic discipline, but I thought I got it close to how a spankee might brat for a spanking? Or at least act incorrigibly so that nobody would question why she got it XD

Just curious, did you read the whole story or just the play part?
I read the whole story. :)

Not sure when the sneeze break was.. My body decided there are too much pollen in the air haha.

I think you did great as to the whole brattiness amd the reason she got spanked. The main thing that would have been different is the mother's embarrassment at the fact that it was her slutty clothes and the consequences of telling your mother that she is fat. That sir, would have been war hahaha.
oh wow! cool!

I was concerned that the sneeze break was... I forget what it implies but supposedly some sort of nervous reaction or some such...

Actually I sort of saw the mother's embarrassment as that she didn't recognize her own clothing but her husband did. I guess that bit of comedy was not well explained enough. It's also supposed to be sort of a crash between a 1950's TV family mother with a modern era dress-style and concepts. I saw the mother as being flabbergasted first that her kinky dress wear was found by her daughter and that she had the gumption to wear it to school.
Still working on refining that part of the story/play yet...
Yes, well, indeed it would have, but since it wasn't her actual mother but an actress who she had been the earlier star of the show, that Tara was replaced by someone "younger and cuter", that Tara would have a personal score to settle with her "daughter" was my aim, I also was thinking of making it that the younger actress had ad-libbed the "fat" part which, again would be reason that the "mother" was going to give her what for! heh heh (but then I thought I was making too many story arcs for what was supposed to be a short story, so I simplified it somewhat.)
If you read my preface to that the play part of the story, I had asked, worriedly, a number of Domme and subbies what they thought of that exchange if it was too much or perfectly bratty. However, you are the first that commented with anything other than "yeah, it's fine", so thank you.

Mostly I am worried that with my explanation of all the cheerleader-like action sequences and moving-people-around that I was sacrificing interest and tempo for artistic description. Definitely one of the more challenging sequences I have had to write so far.

Thanks again for your input! :)
Would be nice to see the world from a creative and positive venue for a change. Despite my lack of writing creativity lately, I do get a streak once in a while and share, hope you won't mind me peaking in and reading with great delight when my life and brain need a 'break'
Dont mind at all. Welcome in. :)